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 One more poem!!:)
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Posted on 03-29-05 7:23 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Dedicated To my Inspiration!!:)..

The Heart was drowning in the flood of memory,
The pain, the hurt, the doom for eternity.
No ray of hope, no beam of light,
Only fire and burns, without a soothing touch on sight.

All numb and wary, no emotions felt,
The heart shut down, in agony it slept.
A beam of light slowly crept through,
But full of distress, the heart did not have a clue.

The warmth, the glory, was dancing all around,
But the eyes stared ahead and the lips made no sound.
Famished and tired, the eyes were dreaming,
Drowned and bleeding, the heart was sleeping.

A healing hand touched the heart soothingly,
But deaf and numb, it kept on fantacising blindly.
The tears were wiped, the hurt was healed,
But the eyes refused to see and the heart refused to feel.

Staring into the nothingness in front,
It failed to feel the loving comfort.
The mind refused to move ahead,
In the flood of agony it drowned instead.

The arms were waiting to engulf with love,
The sweet words whispering, willing the hurt to stop.
But self-pity and ego had build a strong sheild,
Oblivious to the love, ignorant of others' need.

But one morning a beam of light swept to the heart,
The eyes were awake, the heart ready for a new start.
Looking around for the arms that had healed,
The words that had encouraged, the eyes so full of plead.

Instead it saw a shattered dream,
The eyes were blank staring into nothing it seemed.
Healing whispers now changed into words of failure,
No passion in the heart, no aim, no desire.

It had waited, it had dreamt, tried to move the world,
But the ignorance had destroyed and killed the love.
The hope was gone and the heart was bleeding,
The eyes were closed and the mind was sleeping.

The hands that were earlier hurt moved forward to heal
The shattered heart of the angel that had taught it to dream.
The follower had to now become the leader,
Student once, now had to be the teacher.

So on goes the the journey of uncertainity.
A journey of hope to succeed ultimately.

 
Posted on 03-30-05 3:01 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Anj ji...pahileko purano thread mai post garya bhayee hunthyo ne poem...just a suggestion...he he he...This poem is also great....seems you took long time to write coz. u wrote poem after a long gap ...anee auta kura...tapai ko Poem kina saddhai pessimistic huncha bhaneko...he he he ..runnai maan laagne ke....kahile kahi yeso optimistic pani lekhnu na ho...i can't see and read your dreams being shattered every time...he he he ....
 
Posted on 03-30-05 3:21 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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The lines speaks the lines unseen...I see optimism...the optimism born within the pessimism...just two words to say..GREAT WORK....
 
Posted on 03-30-05 3:52 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Here is one to share with you ANJ

Misty sky velvet skin Smell of flowers shyin
Bird sing your name s` Wakens my dreams s`
Following the steps stepping Red bed of rose we walkin
Holding breathe, kissin My love I am dearly missin
We forgive our past yes! We walk towards future
The horizon is clear There will be no fear
Sun shines in your silky hair No doubt every thing is clear
Kiss on forehead, eyes, chicks, and chin Smile flares like the glow in sky
My love says I until I die

 
Posted on 03-30-05 5:59 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice! sabai ta bujhena not a very poetic person , but its a very nice poem indeed :)
Applause
 
Posted on 03-30-05 6:05 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Poison -life is
the cure-death
stop running
from death
drinking poison always
talk about life.

 
Posted on 03-30-05 6:13 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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deep daju long time
Kata bepatta ho heard u were heading to nepalor somethin ....
khai naya story haru chaina .... afno ta kaam ma yaar end of the month shit load of work .... outta here before anj kicks mah a$$ for messing up her thread
 
Posted on 03-30-05 6:52 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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shaq bro..katha ta aba ke katha haina tara ek choti dhulabari ga thiye dasha lagera...euta alachhina le dhulabari ta hamro purba tira ko hong kong ho ni bhanthyo sadhai ma hadigaule lai...night busma ek sanam chahiye aashiquike liye geet sundai huikiyo ek saanjh koshi busma purba tira...birta modema orlera tak kur garera janu parchha dhula bari bhantyo mero purbeli mitra...naranghat purba lage dekhi rat bhari thau thau ko nam ra tyasko bishesata gaudai purayo malai heri birta mode...byan tyastai 10 jati bajya hudo ho...sathi bathroom janchhu bhanera euta hutel tira chhiryo jhola malai jimma layera...ma tya choka yasto lanthyang lunthung gardai thiye duita pulis aayera oo tya thana ma hin ta bhanchhan ba...kina thana ma bhanya kam chha bhanera jhyap jhuppa puraye thana ma ...thana ma asai kadkiyo asti ko maal ka lukais bhanera...bho aba? ke ko mal ..katako mal...kasko mal..kun asti ko?...asai ta swasthani ko birbhadra jasto hune chhat jhikna thalyo...afu raat bhariko anido..ani tyasto fanda ma fasiyo hai dikkai lagera aayo bhanya...purbeli saathi bathroom bata niskesi bhanechhan malai ta thana lagyo bhanera....sathi thana aayera asai sanga khai ke ke bhanyo...malai chai bhaigo ja ...aba aainda yasto nahos bhanera chhodidiyo...ahile samma bujhya chhaina aba aainda ke garna nahune ho bhanera...suspense kya prabho...tyasto bho....tya dekhi purba janai man lagena bhanya malai...sathi mero ali arkai dhanda ma re chha prabho...pachhi hanumandhokama jakhe pachhi po thah bho...hanumandhoka ma malai haina ni prabho jakeko..mero purbeli mitra lai ke...
 
Posted on 03-30-05 8:20 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thanks a lot for your comments...
Ardent I was just a bit lazy to post it in the last thread... hehe.. and well really did not take a long time to write it.. was just a bit busy in other things and yesterday felt like writing something...

Wanted to write an optimistic poem... and gradually the poem took its own way.. all I did was put it in words.. and that was it... in every poem i have an imagination... that develops gradually as i put them into words.. and thats what happened...

Sanjay... a very nice poem.. :) thanks for sharing...

shaq.. glad you liked it... hope u would understand it all though...;)

deep .. nice thoughts...
 
Posted on 03-30-05 8:27 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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P.S... Nirman.. thanks for seeing the optimism.. thats what I really wanted to show..!!:)
 


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