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Moneyminded
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Posted on 12-09-04 3:02
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Its not my original idea. I saw it in a couple of forums and thought some of you may find it intersting. Here's the deal. Everybody adds exactly 3 sentences to continue the story. you can write anything and change the theme in anyway but your three sentences should be the continuation of the preceding sentence. Here it goes... Naniram was having his first date with a sweet girl at Tudikhel... Then suddenly they were aware of the " pratigaman biruddhako andolan" coming from ratna park... terrorized by the agitation, Naniram ...
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KaLaNkIsThAn
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Posted on 12-09-04 3:12
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terrorized by the agitation, Naniram tosses and turns but can not sleep all night. He feels his forhead, it's warm. He thinks he might have gotten fever. It was the night of the Full moon, so without turning the lights on, he reaches for a glass of water and walks to the window. He peeks outside in the dark thinking about a girl. Suddenly he sees a white figure lurking in the dark....
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DC_Girl
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Posted on 12-09-04 10:25
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hyaa Kalanki bro...jhan MM le kasto interestingly story suru garya thiyo, ali romantic romantic hola jasto thiyo, kasto story nai swattai modera 'he suddenly sees a white figure lurking in the dark' re...kya jhur bro, bhut ko katha nagarau na.. hehe ;) Suddenly he sees a white figure lurking in the dark...but he realizes it was just a wierd feeling. Next afternoon he's again on a date with another sweet girl, in Ratnapark. The girl wants him to buy titaura, and he gets mad...
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compulsive_liar
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Posted on 12-09-04 10:38
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The girl wants him to buy titaura, and he gets mad... then he sees that white figure again but this time she is lady in black.He panics,pushes his date away and runs and runs and runs....then suddenly he realizes his pants all wet.He wonders what happened then he looks around,finds himself swimming across the pacific ocean."What happened?" he asks himself.The white figure,now in black,replies....
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How Bizarre!!
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:14
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The white figure,now in black,replies.... Naniram wake up its already 10 o'clock don't you have to go to work? It was Naniram's mother trying to wake him up. He takes a deep breath as a sign of relief .... But when he comes out of his bed he realize....
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Rythm
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:19
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But when he comes out of his bed he realizes that all of a sudden he is in the year 2010. He is six years older and has a wife and two kids. He looks at his wife and realizes that it is the same lady in back he was running away from. What had happened in the pacific ocean..?.....
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oys_chill
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:21
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...He realizes that it is Saturday. It was his mom's usual ploy on a Saturday to get him to bathe early. There's a warm cup of mechi special sitting by his bedside. His mind is restless thinking of the day ahead when he would meet..........
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KaLaNkIsThAn
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:27
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... would meet her... he opens his eyes and finds a lady in black standing right in front of him. Bewildered, he looks at her eyes. Her eyes are lustful. Her skin is glowing like a candlelight. He can not control himself. He jumps towards her and holds her tight. Surprisingly, her back is hollow. He looks at her feet, her toe is on the opposite direction. Suddenly he remembers...
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Rythm
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:29
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not fair oys.. i had a different story going on!!
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oys_chill
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:30
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....what his mom had warned bout women with toes in opposite direction. To his amazement, the lady in black changes to white sari once more faster than the actresses in songs of hindi movies. Unable to control his emotions, he starts to sing "rati rati hidne, seto sari laune, tyai ho tarsaune........"
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oys_chill
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:33
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rythm, when you lose the beat, you also lose the rhythm. If you found it unfair, cry a river, build a bridge and get over it :) jus kiddin!
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compulsive_liar
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:34
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he starts to sing "rati rati hidne, seto sari laune, tyai ho tarsaune........" then there she was again standing all alone in the middle of the road.This is something is different,he notices."oh yeahhhh now I see". The lady (was it really a lady?can be a trans or herma or a lady) was holding a candle and singing a song "twinkle twinkle little star...."Before finishing the nusery rhyme she looks at him and opens are mouth.Now he is really scared and ....
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KaLaNkIsThAn
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:38
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..tyahi ho tarshaune kichkannniiii"... tadaak!! He gets a nice slap on his cheek. "I am your aunty, not kichkanni"... he can not understand whats happening to him. He tries to forget the incident with his aunt and concentrate more on today's date. He wonders what is she going to wear today, white? black? or some other color. He goes to the bathroom. Fills up the tub and goes inside it. Suddenly he is back in pacafic Ocean again... deja vu?... he thinks...
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:44
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he thinks......... wish i coud be in teh future and see what all happens then, so i don't have to worry about the stupid life i have rt now.just then he falls asleep in the bath tub, and feels a little tingling sensation in his head and he wakes up to find one robot massaging his head. he jumps up and screams at the top of his lungs and runs to the room to see that the date was 2068 and he didn't grow old but the bath tub he had wad a time portal
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oys_chill
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:48
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..time portal..He slaps himself and gets another tingling sensation. Deja vu? again. Back is naniram with his thoughts of ratnapark and the gal he's supposed to meet...his fm radio is playing that old song of pink floyd..wish you were here :P...
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Pink_floyd
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:51
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wish u were here ...... then he thinks wish his lovely highschool sweetheart was with him and they were *doing whatever* . thinking that he calls her and says "hello is there anybody in there, just nod if u can hear me, is there anyoneat home, cummon, now i hear u r feeling down, well i can ease u'e pain , get u on your feet again, cummon n ow, i need some information first, just the basic facts, can u show me where it hurts"?
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How Bizarre!!
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:51
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he thinks... he is going to drown. he tries to swim but the harsh cold waves don't let him escape...and he drowns. After few hours he opens his eyes and he finds himself in a strange room with bars. He has a long beard and is wearing a blue apron kind of outfit. He tried to figure out where he is and he realizes... he is in metal hospital...he screams.....
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:52
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" Wish if you were here So, so you think you can tell Heaven from Hell, blue skies from pain. Can you tell a green field from a cold steel rail? A smile from a veil? Do you think you can tell? And did they get you to trade your heroes for ghosts? Hot ashes for trees? Hot air for a cool breeze? Cold comfort for change? And did you exchange a walk on part in the war for a lead role in a cage? How I wish, how I wish you were here. We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year, Running over the same old ground. What have we found? The same old fears. Wish you were here." is all he can hear."OH MY GOD!I AM DEAF!" he realizes.Then he sees that white/black dressed women this is it's half and half and no it's not his aunt....it's a WHALE NO NO A SHARK...NO NO He is swimming...back in the pacific ocean.Then a strange thing happens....
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How Bizarre!!
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:52
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shoot!! i am so freakin slow :o(
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oys_chill
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Posted on 12-09-04 11:54
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..hey ram! says the psychiatrist. " you are not in the mental hospital. you are here for a therapy remember? Naniram nods his head "you have a vivid imagination naniram. you should stop going to ratnapark, and go to godavari for a change... the very thought of godavari breathes a new life on him and off he goes...........
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