hmmmmm.....goooood topic- headline ---u caught me !!!I will definately read it tonite ;)

Feri to be continued?? Will read later..:)

i will try to finish reading it this summer

Amber, again very well written and interesting. Hope to read the remaining part soon..

amber,
very descriptive, captivating story (O:
eagerly waiting for the continuation.

You guys are awesome, I used to read Galts, this is the first time i read yours, touchy, i feel so proud of you my Nepali fren. keep writing .

Very cute family story and a great write-up. I could get into the skin of the characters while reading and feel what they're feeling. BRAVO! I am your instant fan. Eagerly waiting for the following parts.

i msick and tired of " to be contunued"
ki lekhdai na lekhnu..lekhe pachi pura lekhnu...

amber,
when do i get 2 read next part.... being impatient kya (O:

You chose "Bratabandha" as the occasion to introduce the family, their history, their values and their relationships. A keen observer can learn more about a person than the subject himself in such occasions. And the wonderful writer on you should be lauded for such pictursque and finesse illustration.
Now the title suggests that these family values are about to change with new place and different age. I am impatiently waiting for those grown ups.

Amber,
Once again you have lived up to the expectation of an incredible writer. You have the rare acumen of fusing ordinary details to bring about an extraordinary narration. Also, I marvel your ability to elaborate on smallest of details that amateur writers like me often miss out for the heck of completing it.

Bodmas,
I apologize not replying back on my earlier thread, wish I had more time. I appreciate your thoughts, which, however does not justify when you compare my work with Amber's. She is one of the best Nepali writer I have come across, I'd kill anyone to get in her shoes.

niceeeeeeeeeeeeee . Infact, damn niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Galt you missed my point here. I am not comparing. I thought you were the only one writing stories, and i discovered Amber. Kudos to both of you. There is not a scale where you can compare creativity , they are always unique.
carry on

amber this is a brilliant piece of work.. though i was i the office and m not allowed to surf for a long time but this story was so catchy that i took break to read this.......The story which includes everything family, family values, love, relatives, rituals, culture,friendship,determination, education we say and it has it in it.. wish i could be that articulate but unfortunately m not.. i must say that this is one of the best short story i have read.

Love, Lust and The Impure thoughts in between

When i saw this heading I thought what could be the this all about but each line captivated me more amd more towards the dept of the story.. all characters are intereting. Mother is qualified in all aspects. Father is a responsible man towards the family and the country(or else he would have benn working abroad). Brother is mature enough.....Shristi si the ultimate character with full of life
Not to forget all servants who r loyal and trustworthy........
In every direction and angle this is a perfect and cute litte story .,

Amber please continue and finish it as soon as possible.......................................

A fan of urs Dinesh

Hey Amber! C'est execllent! When is the second part coming?

Plz some read it 4 me.

amber,
kati bhau khojeko... kamse kaam .. "to be continued" bhako 4 deen bhai sakyo response ta post garnu parchha...

kurda kurda dikka lagne kya...

dikka lagyo.
where is the next part?

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwnnnnnnn. You call this a short story ?

still waiting for the next part.