see Mos Def, Nas, Biggie ,,, ma fav rappers they freestyle n spit words like doin magic makin rhymes at the spot n makin deep sense at the same time .... i do write lyrics i did text battles but writin skills were the only ones which improved of course it helped a lot but still i cant freestyle even below the average dats true i confess i'm tryin at times but its frstratin sumtimes... so r u at the same spot as me? or do ya furreal do spit...(not text) but spit rhymes at spot ?... juz drop ya 2 cents peepz.............

well man, for the last time, nobody in sajha is particularly fond of putting words with marked semblance to nursery rhymes together and then brag about being a rapper. Just because you like to spell words like "me" with an "a" at the end, you think you're a rapper and then try to pose at sajha where nobody gives a flying fluck about rap anyway.

And when it comes to freestyle rap in a general sense, 90% of it is a one rhyme fits all punch lines, its not very original. So stuff it homeboy!

hahahaha yeh everytime a man speaks a brain out dese muhfawkaz trynna suk ma dk read the thread title blind posta it asks abt opinion n if ya dont relate to nephop then why ya bother postin reply pssyaszz yeh its okay if ya says sum abt wat the thread asks for but ya crossin line if ya talk abt me homoboi talk abt the art not bout me n read the title once again lil kid like i said i say it once again if ya not related to it why u bother answering???? thats simple to understand streetgal pussay

oho bhai yeta ni aipugecha

we nepalese so we dont speak G dont speak thug dont speak guns we speak reality

oie doxman.....taile mero comment delete garish ki ......administration le garyo ek choti bhan ta malai....

Dox,

I see where you're coming from.  However, what you wrote isn't even legible so I find it hard to take you seriously.  At the least, use a period every now and then. 
Other than that, it takes practice to be able to spit.  Nas, Biggie, Mos Def they've been doing (did) it for tens of years so it doesn't happen overnight. To get to that level you gotta have hella practice.  Try feestylin in front of a mirror or with the homies when you get together.  Practice makes perfect but you gotta have the passion for it first and foremost.  Hope that helps.

yea imma G,
G-U-N-D-A,
out the KTM but livin in the A!

now i'm in the mood to spit. thanks

Alright, so here come some "G's." Do you even know what that means? Wearing sagging pants, itching your balls, wearing a hat and writing in severely rudimentary language is not gonna make you look cool. Ani now whats up with this whole "NepHop" crap? You serious? If I fart its gonna sound better than some uneducated third division holders trying to embarass themselves on public domain. Doxman or whatever, please take your juvenile issues to a teen website, or a "hiphop" website and they might be able to help you. Believe me, Nepali Hiphop embarasses most of us. 

fock east coast.........b*tch arse modafockers.......fake arse.......fock biggie, nas ,or whoever from east coast

Hakim,

thank you for expressing the views of every Nepali <insert sarcasm> and rudimentary: "up yo vocab" - Bun B.
Hip Hop isn't about saggin pants n what not. If the kid wants to talk about it let him (as you said, it is a public domain), who are you to say anyone cares more about your thoughts than Dox's.  And 8848, I think you're only a decade and a half behind.

Believe me DJ, I've seen it. I've listened to countless rap albums ranging from Public Enemy all the way to Lil Wayne and with hip-hop, there's a background attached with the rapper. In the Nepali context, rap finds itself nowhere. If its done well, I can live with that, but most "rappers" do it out of sheer delusion. Plus, all hiphop does is intice violence, misogynism. Look at black people here, they listen to rap's destructive messages and more than half of them go down a road marked by teen pregnancies, academic doom, violence, drugs, HIV and what not. Nepalis should learn and take heed. Listening to it is ok, but Living it? No way. Nepali hiphop is the worst music genre people have ever known. Haven't you noticed that there are no hit nepali rap songs except for a couple by Nepsydaz?

Stereotypes are all that you are holding onto.  Don't forget that your president is black.

yeah ....i think so dj yeti...and you are just too fast and forward....i just cannot stand east coasts man....i cannot.... thats it

Yes and he does not like the message of rap either

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pFSVG7jRp_g

I agree with what he said.  It's a form of art. Don't write off all of hip hop because you've only listened to ones with poor messages.  It was your choice to listen to that message.  Instead, listen to a rap album with a constructive message (there are many that do exist).  These artists do not get the due recognition because you only focus on those that you find offensive. Choose love not hate and you will be happier for it.  It's like saying Picasso should have stopped paining forever after Les Demoiselles d'Avignon was poorly received by critics who though it was too vulgar when in fact it changed the course of art forever. Same thing with Elvis and his hip-shakin which was thought to be too sexual in nature. All forms of art. Don't shoot the messenger. Ya Dig?

hey dj yeti.....thats true man.....u have to love the music, sound, words to love that kinda music.......i mean its upon u what u want to hear......if u hate rap dont listen it...if u have metal dont listen it.....all musics have their own way of presentation, flow, ....i mean i like the beats...the rapping skills...but fock east coast and not least fock doxman....trying to be smart arse...he aint got no repect... tyo m*ji doxman praises himself.....he aint got no respect for others......i mean he got website, there are millions of people who have website.....and take example of San bro...he really appreciates feedbacks...he ez down to the earth guy....but this mudafocker doxman......jezz i can feel how selfish, and nonsense bastard he ez.....

yea i'm back again n i'm happy at least there is someone who really got the title n i respect that , DJ Yeti, yeh its years n years of hardwork worship n practice true that...n yup i was trynna juz get people's opinions. peepz who r in the same stream as me about how they feel bout wat they doin now or how they doin now... jus sum info stuff ... and peepz like hakim n 8848 dun even fit to post here cuz they dunno wat they postin about????!!! n this fatherFawka 8848 needs to have his mentality's height increased to the number he got in his name...8848m... n yup a straight question to this sad pathetic boi..

GIVE ME ONE LINE WHERE I EVEN BOASTED ABOUT MASELF SOB...WHICH ONE OF MA LINES EVEN SAY THAT I AM THIS N I AM THAT ? I'M AN AVERAGE NEPALI YOU SICK SOCK...

hhhhahaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....malai yeti haas uthyo ki maile ahile....nephop....community sangai type garyo bhanne promotion bhanera ban gardo rahicha......malai tha thiyo pakkai ni administration tyo garcha bhanera kinna ki ta jasto le derai faiya uthauna khojis yo site ko........lol

hey dox lets see

I'ma keep updatin my words n maybe in future I'm start givin out free beats to NepHop artists if I'm okay wittem... haaaaaaaaaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....lol

i mean u got some beats thats right...but do not make such comments...u aint no renouned artist or producer......u are just a kid my fren.....just started a hiphop life......if Gorkhalig had made this comment, oh hell ya .he ez a good artist....but u aint got nothing...there are hundreds ho have their websites son, and guys like nurbu, aroz and other faggoooots make nephop ruined...coz u kno y......their rap rhymes are like....ma yesto garchu......ma maiya lai club lanchu........ma teha janchu....wtf ez that.....rap rhymes without strong lyrics.just a videos showing they got gmc and lemoisune and focking bit*..ches.....though there are good hiphop artists like gorkhalig, da69, nepsydez even madzone, NSK...thats y nephop ez still alive.

my fren...i do not kno if u r making this ur personal website or not.....but if u r making this website for nephop fans...do not personalize it........do not give the name nep...hop....community....com......name it as doxman....com or something like 50 cent and p diddy or nsk or gorkhalig does.....u have to accept feedbacks if u are making fans website....see sajha itself....if any user ez disatifies he san will give clearification......thats the way u use your website....if you only want your stuffs to be there....and make it personal website...but in my knowlege u said its gonna be for nep hop fans website.

Next thing man......i just was saying stop advertising your website in public sites.....u did for more than a month and i don kno any other sajha users or members care but i do....think as reverse if sajha was ur website.....and somebody advertises in your website about his website...would u be happy my fren.....as i said....introducing a website ez not bad..i really appreciate ur efforts...but advertising daily for more than a month ez not good...that makes u selfish my fren...i personaly do not hate ur songs.. ur beats are good, baby gurl ez a good hiphop song...but what matters ez ur attitude...if u think thats ur website and only you wanna be the visitor of your website then thats fine my fren....keep it up.....its like ur personal profile website...

and last word...keep on P...I...M...P...ing my son

oie doxman......tero tyo running constantly video ma passang cha.tyo golden peak bata slc diyeko passang ho....saraswati nagar.....tyo gopi krishna hall pachadi basne....