Interesting. I am keeping my fingers crossed.

A keyhole view of the cluttered room but the objects in the room are always in order when looked selectively and individually.

Amber,

Waiting for the rest of it.

Hey Amber, i ve seen some of your stories in Sajha but never got a chance to read. I think u r one of the most sought after story tellers (English) of Sajha including sum_off, sajha_gazer, john_galt, Rythm and some others.

This time I was was able to read your wonderful piece, I simply like your simplicity and the way you have weaven the words, story is wonderful too. Like we say 'First impression lasts forever'....wont miss your other works from now on.

Waiting for its CONTD part..........

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Pokhara is  heaven, perhaps the best place I ve ever been. While going through story my mind was right there in Lakeside, so cant stop posting lovely snap, found in wiki.

Edited ... I mean added.....(from here)

Amber, I was going to read again the whole story but to my surprise you have deleted it.....:-( its so sad. I hope u will undo...

If by chance, your mood is off here is wonderful song, just listen and enjoy :-).

Oye, maha gyani manche, timro story kaha haraiyo??  Pls post it back hai otherwise yo gyani manche will be gyani no more.

What goes around comes around.

I don't blame karma for that.

Hi Amber,  i hope you garland back the noble piece as per   it basis because your story for me is a heritage of Nepal, its part of tourist guide and become your precious contribution of the Nepali sashtra in the world literatures libraries in which is it is rare and master piece of you that can be a benolevent for others especialy as a research and references files of Nepali writers from the view of Nepali eccentic.Please load again  your "gold tinted' creative literature, as i presumed it as a thesis ~ something to be proud of too, hajur.

Amazing, thank you for the lovely song. It is my mom's favorite. I know the song is for Amber but thanks for putting it there.

mademoiselle,
if it has to be deleted, why bother posting it in the first place?????

gives me an impression that you post your stories for people when a true aspiring writer, which you definitely are, should be posting it for yourself and not get bothered by what other people think of you or your stories. aren't you 'woman' enough?

oh wow! I made time and came to read your story, and,

        IT’S GONE! !!

Amber,

You write with such an intensity that I have to read it more than a couple of times to fully understand it. That's why this time I was thinking of reading it only I had enough time to go through it twice in a single seating.

But where did the story go? Is it in the editing room? I am really hoping you would post it back again. Please, do us a favor here. I want to tell you that have never read as intense a Nepali writer who writes in english as you are.

 

Thanks everyone! Amazing  nice song there.
For some reason I could not continue this story. My apologizes!