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amricane
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Posted on 04-05-12 1:11
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बा २ करोड को लोभ मा ,
बाबुराम अंकल ले दिन्छ भन्ने विश्वाश मा
सगरमाथा चड्छु भनी खोकी हाले ,
पैसो त मिलेन मिलेन सगरमाथा चै चाडनै पर्ने भो ,
बा यो पाली कस्को को आँखा लाग्यो हाम्रो कमाइ मा
मैले फोकट मा काम गर्न पर्ने भो ।
बा सगरमाथा चड्न गाह्रो रइछ ,
१३ हजार को लास मा चडेर सत्ता पुगे जस्तो सजिलो रइनछ ,
घोडा चडेर रोल्पा गये जस्तो हैन रइछ ,
पचासो काम्रेद काम म राखेर मस्ती गरे जस्तो हुन्न रइछ ,
बा सगरमाथा चड्न गाह्रो रइछ ।
बा सगरमाथा ले तिम्रो कुरो मान्दैन राइछ ,
मैले म प्रचन्न को छोरो हुँ भनेको
सुनेको न सुनै गर्दो रइछ ,
मैले म सँग अझै धेरै सक्ती छ भनेर धम्क्याको
अटेर गरेर बस्दो रइछ ,
हीउ पारेर मलाई सगरमाथा ले बा अगी बद्न नदिदो रइछ
बा यहाँ तिम्रो पावर नचल्ने रइछ ।
बा एउटा बात चै यहाँ रमाइलो रइछ,
जती जाड खाएनी हुने रइछ ,
जता लडे पनि हुने रइछ ,
न यहाँ पत्रकार छ ,
न क्यामरा ,
न कसैले देख्ला भन्ने डर छ न कसैको वास्ता नै छ ,
बा यहाँ जाड तन्न खान पाइदो रइछ ।
बा यहाँ त एक दम चिसो रइछ ,
मैले हिजो ग्रिनेड पड्काएर आगो बालेको थे ,
एक छिन त तातो भो ,
तर सगरमाथा को चिसो सामु हाम्रो केइ नलाग्ने रइछ ,
हाम्रो त्यस्तो महँगो बारुद पनि फिक्का भो ,
बा सगरमाथा तिमी भन्दा बल्वान रइछ ।
बा मलाई थाहा छ ,
तिम्लाई नि थाहा छ
मैले सगरमाथा चडेर सम्भिधान बन्दैन ,
न त मैले सगरमाथा चडेर शान्ति नै आउछ ,
मैले त केबल जनता को आँखा मा छारो हाल्न खोजेको थे,
प्रचन्न पुत्र ले केही गर्यो भन्ने पार्न खोजे थे ,
तर बा केही गर्यो भन्ने पार्न लाई केइ गर्न पर्ने रइछ ,
सित्तै मा हजारो काम्रेद को लाखौं खाए जस्तो सजिलो रइनछ
बा सगरमाथा चडन गाह्रो रइछ,
किनकी सगरमाथा ले रगत को भाषा नबुज्दो रइछ ।
Note :For sure I am not Prakas Dahal , Please comment about my poem, not about politics over here. Thank you
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dipika02
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Posted on 04-06-12 8:28
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" बा मलाई थाहा छ ,
तिम्लाई नि थाहा छ
मैले सगरमाथा चडेर सम्भिधान बन्दैन ,
न त मैले सगरमाथा चडेर शान्ति नै आउछ ,
मैले त केबल जनता को आँखा मा छारो हाल्न खोजेको थे,
प्रचन्न पुत्र ले केही गर्यो भन्ने पार्न खोजे थे ,"
यथार्थ बोधिक। राम्रो लाग्यो।
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Bhaktey
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Posted on 04-06-12 8:32
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समसामयिक घत लाग्दो प्रस्तुती "अमेरिकाने"जी !!
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BinodB
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Posted on 04-06-12 8:35
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D dai,
kabita ramro cha !!
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nakkali keti
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Posted on 04-06-12 9:48
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Posted on 04-06-12 9:56
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Prachanda and his son must see this. This poem needs to go viral. I have shared this in FB. Please share!
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collegefootballrocks
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Posted on 04-06-12 10:10
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Can we share this in Facebook?
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amricane
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Posted on 04-06-12 11:03
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मेरो सानो रचना लाइ मन पराइ दिएर मलाई सदै हौसला दिने मेरा साझा का साथी हरु लाई मा धेरै धन्यवाद दिन चाहन्छु
यो हाम्रो साझा हो र यहा हामी सबै को सबै कुरा साझा हो , जहाँ जहाँ बाड्न मन लाग्छ मित्र हरु ले ढुक्क भएर बाद्नुस .
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Posted on 04-06-12 2:48
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Dami chha.................
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halo
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Posted on 04-06-12 3:52
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Nice! I hope Prachada's son dies climbing Everest.
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buzz
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Posted on 04-06-12 4:15
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I hope Sagarmatha takes the guy as a sacrifice for the peace in the country!!
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halo
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Posted on 04-06-12 4:19
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I hope Buzz's wish comes true :)
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Posted on 04-06-12 4:24
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Gajjab! tara tyo mu G lai sagarmatha chadhna dinu parthyo k...mu g marthyo ki!
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Posted on 04-06-12 4:33
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चड्न खोज्दै छ क्यारे होइन र?
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Ojaswi rana
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Posted on 04-13-12 12:59
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amricane
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Posted on 04-18-12 7:56
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Somebody copied my poem and publish in his name. This is shamefull. I just publish my poem on texasnepal.com and our sajha.com https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10150693861418601&set=a.10150611703053601.378606.48490668600&type=1&theater
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Posted on 04-18-12 8:16
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One of my friend also shared your poem from that fb page and I thought they got it from you. But it turned out someone else is publishing it in his name which is really shameful. Did you write to the people realted with nepalkhabar.com or that fb page?
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amricane
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Posted on 04-18-12 8:36
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GT bro, i dont use my original name on both sites. I publish as amricane on texasnepal too. I havent wrote to anyone. My friend from texasnepal said he will write to both person
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Posted on 04-18-12 8:51
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देशमा/नेपालीहरुमा चोरहरु कमि छैनन् भन्ने अर्को उदाहरण हो. प्रताप मगर भन्ने व्यक्तिले निर्धक्क संग आफ्नै रचना भाको सरि नेपाल खबर डट कम लाइ प्रकाशन गर्न अनुमति दिएको देखिन्छ . भन्नाले निज मगर ले लाजै पचाएर आफ्नो रचना भनी फेशबुक मा राखेको देखिन्छ.
जिते ब्रो, यस्ता चोरहरुको भण्डाफोर को अभियान नै चलाउनु पर्ला जस्तो छ . धन सम्पति का चोर भन्दा निर्लज्ज र नीच स्तरका चोर हरु हुन् , यिनीहरु . .
https://www.facebook.com/magar.pb
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amricane
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Posted on 04-18-12 9:48
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Khai rahul dai ke bhannu aba. Nepal khabar.com re, kb shrestha re, nepali flag re kunni ke magar re sab ko haat cha. Kollai kollai bhanna janu aba. I am never a name or fame crazy but it fells bad when somone is getting praise for your work :(
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Posted on 04-18-12 10:27
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लोल ठुल्दाइ, लास्टै चोर रेछन् टैट्, एस्सो वाल हेर्दा नि जंगली जस्तै रेचन् https://www.facebook.com/magar.pb/info none-the-less, this was simply awesome. Kudos!!! Couldnt have been any better... (Y)
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