A MISERLY IMPULSE

>>> Click here for the whole story.

Thanks a lot for undeleting the story; eagerly waiting for the second part.

Thanks sum_off for doing us all a favor here.  Much appreciated.

Enjoy your Thanksgiving break.

lau delete garera feri post garisakya raichha ma po dhila bhaechhu. second part kahile aauchha sum_off?

Sum_off , here we are  eagerly awaiting .

Sum_off, where is the second part? Waiting..

sajha also lets u edit these days...dang!!!!!!!! khatra po recha...post gardai edit gardai garna ramailo :)...kaapi maa pensil ley lekheko jastai...jati metaaye pani huney :P...pheri metauchu ma yo hai :)

And waiting...............

 

I have appended the rest of the story at the bottom of my original posting (scroll all the way up). The whole piece looks like one post now. The story is 26 pages long. Hope you have time to read it.

                        

Thanks Sum_off, was great..waiting for another part now..(didn't know haat suteko lai sachai hands asleep bhancha bhanera )

Where is the story????

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I can't post it. San says there is a database field limitation problem. Too big, I think.

Email me.

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Me too

lau sum off dai i was on the verge of hibernating and if this database limitation problem doesn't get fixed, I'll have to wait for hmm another 2 weeks to read it.......san dai bhayena kehi ta garnai paryo
and 26 pages!!!!.......sounds gripping........hi5 sum off dai............keep me in the mailing list too
(high priority!!)

Sum_Off,
I will appreciate it if you can email the story to me too. I am so passionate reader of your stories.

Sum_Off, if you don't mind, could you please email it to me too? Thank you in advance.

Thanks sum_off for the long awaited story. The database field finally reached its limitation so had to link it as a different file. A treat for the weekend!

Best wishes,
San

Thanks again San..a treat for the weekend indeed !!

sumoff,
everytime i read you i find myself comparing you with published writers? 'Is sumoff too this good?' 'Are his words well chosen?' 'Is he authentic always?' 'Does he sketch the characters well?'  'Could sumoff too write like vikram seth?'

with this story, i know one thing for sure. It doesnt matter. Month after month and now year after year, I have eagerly waited for your stories. And once I start, your stories keep me riveted. I dont know one other writer who writes like you.  You have your own style. It is inevitable too that you will be published. You once put forth an argument that to be published one had to be more ambitious than you are. .....

......To keep on writing, and turning out stories upon stories upon good stories and each one of them distinctly different from the other and especially this one, 26 pages long. That my friend is DISCIPLINED ambition and you have got it.

I should also take this opportunity to thank you too for keeping on writing on sajha. As I was reading this story. your deleting the story somewhat became clear to me. Because you were not sure what you were posting in sajha for? But I know i speak for myself and many others when I say that, you are more talked about than you can ever imagine. You are talked about in my friend and family circle. And whenever you put a story up we are like,'yespali ko sumoff padhya ho?' But your 'tantrums' (for lack of a better word) get talked about too, 'sumoff padhna khojeko, delete gardisakecha'..... which you could do without.

Just one question though, 'How did a mother like Kirti raise a son like Sunil?'

Was a nice read sum off dai, enjoyed every bit of it, never really guessed the ending, as always I am in awe with your imagination, It was worth the wait we all had to go through..