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Posted on 01-08-08 10:00 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nepal ko chora, superb!!!!!!

"Whatever time may bring or how life may have hove,
but always remember that you will have my love"......so touchy

 
Posted on 01-08-08 10:06 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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यो 'आमा' शीर्षकको जे सुकै जतिबेला देखे पनि मन अर्कै हुन्छ!

धन्यवाद् नेप्चे, आज आमा संग कुरा गर्छु म!


 
Posted on 01-08-08 10:09 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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kohi baau samjhine kohi aamaa, mai raichhu kulanghaar baabai kasailai nasamjhine, lau mia pani aaba chainejo duitailai samjhera kehi garnu parla jasto bho ki kaso,

je hos NKC, timi chai lekchau hai bro, kamal kalam duitai raamari chalaudo raichhau hai.

 
Posted on 01-08-08 10:15 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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NKC, you're in a writing spree ho? Amazing !! Loved it.

 
Posted on 01-08-08 10:46 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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very touching-- liked it as always.
 
Posted on 01-08-08 10:48 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Good poem Nepche! Keep it up!
 
Posted on 01-08-08 10:50 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nepche good job! ;)
 
Posted on 01-08-08 10:56 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nepche awesome poem

 
Posted on 01-08-08 11:05 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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....आमा।।।

त्यसै न्यानो लाग्छ यो शब्द।।।... जति सुकै tension भएनि, डुक्क लाग्छ ।।

लेख्दै गर्नु होला।....


 
Posted on 01-08-08 12:47 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Dipika,

Thank you very much for the "sugared" note.  I am glad that you liked it and found it touchy. 

 

जिम्माल बा,

हो, त्यो एक शब्दले नै मन हुन्छ। पढेर दुइ शब्द लेखिदिनु भको मा धेरै धन्यबाद।

 

कलेजो जी,

कमल को त के कुरा गर्नु खै, कलम चाइ यसो कहिले काही सार्ने प्रयास गर्छु। तपाइको शब्दहरु प्रति आभारी छु।

 

Sndy Dijyu,

Testo spree nai ta haina, tara mero yaso mood chaleko bela kahile kai lekhne bani chha. Thank you very much for those nice words, Dijyu.

 

Pjna,

I am happy that you liked it too. Thank you very much for the generous remark.

 

Chitre,

Thanks brother. I really appreciate your kind words.

 

Nails,

Thank you very much for dropping by to leave a note.

 

Thulee,

I appreciate your generous note. Thanks..

 

Somewhereondearth,

मन छुने कुरा गर्नु भयो। हो, केवल त्यो एक शब्दले नै जिन्दगीको सबै पिडा बिर्साइ दिने रहेछ। पढेर दुइ शब्द ब्यक्त गर्नु भएको मा मुरी मुरी धन्यबाद।


 
Posted on 01-08-08 9:21 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Great job there... Your poems have the natural flow..

 
Posted on 01-09-08 8:07 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Chimgalogi magar,

Thank you very much the gracious words.


 
Posted on 01-09-08 8:21 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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नेप्चेको कविता पढेर कस्तो मन नै कुटुक्क भो। म त आज घर फोन गर्छु।
 
Posted on 01-09-08 8:30 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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oh.. so touchy. Great expression of feelings.

 


 
Posted on 01-09-08 8:41 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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आमा अर्थात पृथ्वी
जसलाई कहिले आफ्नो सन्तान भार हुँदैन
जो आफु माटो /पानीमा दलिएर आफ्नो सन्तानलाई भनेर अन्न उब्जाइदिन्छिन
आफु चर्को घाममा तापिन्छिन तर आफ्नो सन्तानको लागि छहारि दिने रुखको भार बहन गर्छिन
आमा हजुर महान हुनुहुन्छ, हजुर लाई साष्टाङ  डण्डवत् र धेरै धेरै माया छ
नेप्चे राम्रो छ लेखाइ, धन्यवाद


 
Posted on 01-09-08 8:41 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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malai pani ama huna man lagyo. amako pani yad ayo.

tespachi yo poem mero lagi pani huncha hai, NKC Jyu?

Last edited: 09-Jan-08 08:41 PM

 
Posted on 01-09-08 9:34 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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गुरु,

घर सम्झेर मन त आफ्नो पनि बेला बेला कुटुक्क गर्छ।  साथै हजुरको शब्द प्रती आभारी छु।

SurNaTal ji,

I really appreciate your kind remarks. Thank you very much.

CL,

Damn...I thought you were already a mom.  Yeah, definately the poem would be for you once you become a "mother".

रिट्ठे ब्रो,
खुब चित्त बुझ्दो कुरो गर्नु भयो। आमाको बर्णन गर्न त सयाद शब्द पनि कम हुन जान्छन। प्रतिक्रियाको लागी मुरी मुरी धन्यबाद।

Last edited: 09-Jan-08 09:35 PM

 


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