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 Tranquille – I Call Her My Love
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Tranquille – I Call Her My Love

By Credence Trend
January 11, 2008, 4:00 AM (On a sleepless night)

Her heart as clear as crystal, her mind as tranquil as sea before tides
She lets me see her mind, through a heart that nothing hides
She’s looked at by others, as though she’s but a lady behind a screen
But she lets me see her and her mind that no one has ever seen

The deepest corners of her mind, the endless bottom of her heart
It indeed feels as though I’ve seen her every part
Yet when I look into her beautiful shiny eyes
I know it’s with her that I long to discover life’s lows and highs

Often I wonder, what good have I really done?
To deserve the love of this lady, after years of love undone
Despite the insipid course that my life has so far run
She’s made me feel as though that the life has just begun

An acclaimed poetess herself, with feelings she expresses when her mind’s at extremes
My attempt at this ‘poetry’, not more than sophomoric even in my wildest dreams
A master of a mind she is, a mind that masters deepest gen
Yet the mind as deep as sea, she hides, for humble she’s always been

Every time I look at her, I see a face that’s blithe, happy, and charming
Love blooms between two hearts that are forever and ever warming
People call her tranquille, people call her screen
I simply call her my love, who’s got a heart that’s wide, warm, and open

Note: I wrote this over 6 months ago, on January 11, 2008.

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Posted on 07-28-08 11:21 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Wonderful verses...Keep up the good work !!!
 
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Nepal ko chora, a big thank you.
 


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