God and Human: A fantasy

Commander:  Captain, after 10 light years in space, engine is showing the signs of wear and tear, we may need to build new engine for our spaceship

Captain: How long this engine will last?

Commander: Indicators show that we may need new engine after approximately one light year. Last time we needed new engine after travelling for nine light years. This engine served us well

Captain: Start scanning this part of the Universe, Let me know when we find planet/s containing Moblotungstaplaite (a rare alloy of Molybdenum, Tungsten and Platinum, presumed to be formed during the formation of universe, which when magnetized can hold antimatter).

Captain: First officer, if we are unable to find the Moblotungstaplite in approximately one light year’s time, we shall return to our planet using backup engines, please make arrangements for this.
First Officer: Aye Captain
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After travelling 0.65 light years …… debriefing in situation room

Captain:  SITREP please (Situation Report)

Commander:  Captain long range radars show that there are two planets that most probably contain materials we need. We will be able to confirm it after 0.1 light years.

Captain:  Keep me updated

Commander:  Aye Captain
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After 0.1 light years… debriefing in situation room

Captain:  SITREP please

Commander: Captain, it is confirmed that two planets in nearby solar system contain the moblotungstaplite.

Captain: Scan for the atmosphere and life signs,

Commander: Our scanner shows that one of the planet have breathable nitrogen atmosphere containing about 75% of nitrogen 24% of oxygen, 0.3% of carbon dioxide and other traceable gases and lots of water.
Second planet is little bit smaller than this one, it has mild atmosphere, not enough breathable nitrogen but about 24% of oxygen and rest is helium.

Captain: Any intelligent life signs?

Commander: No Captain, the smaller planet  have only unicellular life signs, Bigger one shows  plenty of different life signs but no intelligent life signs.

Captain: First officer, prepare arrangements for landing. We shall land in bigger planet with breathable nitrogen.
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After landing…. briefing in situation room

Captain: First reconnaissance team will get out of the ship, make a security assessment then rest of us will go. Commander you will lead the reconnaissance team

Commander:  Aye Captain.

Commander completes the reconnaissance of the planet. Captain is holding the team meeting inside the ship

Captain: Commander please debrief us about the planet

Commander: After completing the recon I have prepared few hundred slides about the planet.
The planet has nitrogen rich atmosphere good enough for us to breath. The planet is inhabited by wide range of animals and plants with different physical size but very primitive brain.

Science Officer: Unlike us the animals in planet use oxygen to convert food to energy. They eat complex food and using oxygen they breakdown it into simpler one.
Plants use oxygen, carbon dioxide and water to make food.  They use simple molecules like water, carbon dioxide and sunlight to produce complex molecule. This planet has enough moblotungstaplite to make at least 10 engines.
Commander winds up his presentation after showing all slides, photographs, video of the planets he has taken during the recon.

To Be Continued........

Continued from above..

Captain: Science officer, If we have enough human power then we should stop converting monkey into human. Counselor, before leaving this planet may be we let them know about ourselves.

Social Counselor: Aye sir

Commander: Aye Captain

Captain: Mr. Loran (mining engineer responsible mining of moblotungstaplite) how much material we have collected so far?

Mr. Loran: Captain. We have collected enough material for two engines. We are proceeding according to our initial plan of collecting materials for four engines.

Captain: Very well, what is the purity of the material collected?

Mr. Loran: We have achieved 100% purity Captain

Captain: Make sure that we have prototype of engine ready before we leave this planet

Mr. Loran: Aye Captain

To be continued.....

After two yrs….during debriefing in situation room

Captain: SITREP please

Social Counselor: Captain, humans are in the process of developing complex society. The process, at present, seems slow but they will be able to transform themselves into a organized civilization within 10, 000 years.

Some of the human have developed leadership skill,  they want to know about us, our work here and their future.  May be, it’s time for us to tell them about us.

Captain: Time indeed, if they have developed leadership skill collect about 100 representatives from all five geographical area, I will brief them myself. We will do that after three days. Start preparation.

Social Counselor: Aye Captain

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Three days later in convention hall….

A gathering of human representatives, Captain, Commander, Science Officer, Social Counselor and many other member of the starship.

Humans from five different geographical areas were present in the HQ. They were surprised to see other humans from different geographical areas. Till date humans from each geographical area were thinking that they are the only one of their kind. They were very excited.

A universal translator was set up in order to facilitate the   communication between humans from different geographical areas as well as between humans and members of the spaceship.

Captain: Dear friends, you were showing a lot of interest on us. I am aware of your curiosity to know about us. To satisfy your curiosity, I asked my science team to bring small group of you here. I will explain about us and you are free to explain that to other human.

(Humans were showing various gesture of happiness)

Captain: We live very far away from here. At present you might not aware how far our place is, one day you will know. For you information, let me tell you, our planet is 500 light years away from earth.

Our species is called god and name of our planet is “Heaven”. We do not know how we came to exists. Our research shows that, in the beginning the basic building blocks of the universe were concentrated in one sphere. That sphere exploded, we don’t know why, the explosion scattered molecules of universe and life. This scattering created universe.  In the beginning building blocks of life were not aligned properly. Later as a mean to gain the stability they get aligned which help create primitive life.

Because of that energy present in the universe, the smaller molecules of life aligned to form bigger molecules; as a result a single cell was created. The cell absorbed other molecules and reproduced another cell. In due course of time several single cells assembled together to form a complex life. Our ancestors devoted many generations on science and technology. It is their endeavor which helped us to travel across the universe.

Our species have generated vast knowledge about science and technology. Our team is first to venture outside our solar system and we plan to travel outside this galaxy and finally reach the edge of the universe where time is expanding. During our journey we are continuously improving our technology. At present if everything goes according to the plan we are planning to travel outside of the universe into void space in due course.

After travelling for 500 light years we found this planet. This planet has the material we need for new engines for our spaceship. The materials we need to build the engines, we found in your planet. That’s why we landed here. At the time we landed this planet was dominated by big giant carnivorous animals called dinosaurs. We reduced the atmospheric oxygen content from 24% to 21%. Because of this those giant animals disappeared and monkey started to dominate the planets.

Social counselor: (whispering on Captain’s ear), Captain It is too much scientific for them; they are not that intelligent yet to understand all these.

Captain: I understand Counselor, but it is my duty to tell them why we are here and what are the actions we took. I am showing respect of one intelligent life form to another would be intelligent life form.

Captain (once again facing towards the human gathering): We introduced some of our genes into monkeys; those who got our genes got evolved into human. We created you in our image. You are different species than monkey now. Your brain has become larger. You developed language and you are in the process of developing complex human society in years to come.

Captain pauses

One leader looking Human: Can we ask some questions?

Captain: Please feel free to do so

Human Leader: We feel hunger, after working for few hours, we feel tired after working few hours. But we have not seen you eating or getting tired.

Captain: This is because… (Social counselor interrupts) in his low voice:  Captain we should not reveal the things which they are not able to understand, otherwise they misinterpret those. They will know many things by themselves as their knowledge develops)

Captain: This is because we inhabitant of planet “Heaven” are free of these weakness. We get our energy from ourselves with the help of sunlight. We don’t need to eat. Our supply of energy is continuous so we don’t get tired. You have step wise energy supply system that is why you get tired. Also, our body repairs even if we are working; your body needs rest for repair and maintenance.

Human: What are you called?

Captain: Our species is called god.

Human: All gods are good like you?

Captain: No, some of us, because of mutation, have developed nasty behavior, they are not polite, and they get angry they have destructive nature.

Human: What you do with them?

Captain: We call them Devils. In our solar system there is a smaller planet next to us,  the planet is not God friendly but still good enough to live. That planet is called “Hell”.  We send devils to the planet “Hell”

Human: Can we visit planet “Heaven” or planet “Hell”?

Captain: (thinking that there is no enough oxygen for human to breathe in “Heaven” and “Hell”), No you can not visit our planet while you are alive. (Captain also wanted to take this opportunity to influence development of human society into a constructive, positive thinking society). But, when you die, depending upon your Karma, humans will go either to the “Heaven” or to the “Hell”. If you want to go to “Heaven” you have to do good Karma.

Human: Oh

Social Counselor: Whispering on Captain’s ear): Remember Captain they have some of our gene. Few thousands year later some of human will come to know that there is no after life.

Captain: I understand that counselor. But I wanted them have sense of reward and punishment for their Karma. This will guide towards positive development.

Human: When you complete your task / will some of you stay here?

Captain: No

Human: What if we need you for guidance:

Captain: Whispering in science officer’s ear (what is the possibility of our gene that reflects our nature becoming dominant in humans?

Science Officer: Very, very rare Captain. We haven’t injected them behavioral and thought control gene. But our gene that changed their physical structure may produce that gene.

Captain: Is that possible?

Science Officer: Yes Captain, every gene contains memory of evolution. Our gene that controls certain physical characteristics in humans also contains memory of the gene that controls thoughts and behavior.

Captain:  Very well, what is the possibility of that happening?

Science Officer: One in 1 billion, Captain.

Captain: Very well, (facing towards humans) from time to time our kind may incarnate in human form to guide the human society.

Thank you very much. Help us mining Moblotungstapliute, we will be grateful to you.

The meeting adjourned. Humans were sent to their respective places.

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Human gatherings in all five different geographical areas:

Human Leader: We had audience with god today. They created us. They come from the place called “Heaven”. It is a very beautiful place where there is no hunger, no tiredness and no disease. They don’t fight like us. If we do good Karma we go to “Heaven” when we die, and live happily ever after. But if we do bad karma Gods won’t allow us in “Heaven”. They will send us to “Hell”, where there is more suffering than here. “Hell” is terrible place.

Another Human Leader: Unlike us they are not created by someone else. They were created by themselves. Unlike us they don’t die. They have something that makes them immortal. They will come to us as human when we need them and enlighten us. From today we will call devil to human who do bad karma and punish them following the tradition of Gods.

continued from above....

Human: What if we need you for guidance:

Captain: Whispering in science officer’s ear (what is the possibility of our gene that reflects our nature becoming dominant in humans?

Science Officer: Very, very rare Captain. We haven’t injected them behavioral and thought control gene. But our gene that changed their physical structure may produce that gene.

Captain: Is that possible?

Science Officer: Yes Captain, every gene contains memory of evolution. Our gene that controls certain physical characteristics in humans also contains memory of the gene that controls thoughts and behavior.

Captain:  Very well, what is the possibility of that happening?

Science Officer: One in 1 billion, Captain.

Captain: Very well, (facing towards humans) from time to time our kind may incarnate in human form to guide the human society.

Thank you very much. Help us mining Moblotungstapliute, we will be grateful to you.

The meeting adjourned, Humans were sent to their respective places.

To Be Continued.........

inspired by 'stargate universe'??? 

I'm an avid fan of stargate series..
but the way you tweaked the script, it's interesting..

remember, how 'Eli(hacker)' was amazed when 'human' in the past actually started to think or worship 'Nick(brilliant scientist onboard)' as God or Jesus?? It was pretty interesting.

Damn!!! they stopped the show. No more seasons.

So, there are still questions :
1. How did dinasaurs appear?
2. Light year is a measurement unit , it's not like 'years of months' we count.
2. Captain discussing there is no 'afterlife' and then again telling them, they'll "reincarnate" to guide these pesky humans
3. Hell and Heaven planet concept is rad. I mean 'planet'????
That concept of hell and heaven could've been put on this way.. dimensional.

The universe that we see from our limited ability to see at the sky is not really what we see. Just like dogs can't differentiate much colors, we can't differentiate dimensions and other vast array of color spectrum of the universe.

Naming hell and heaven just planets, narrows the whole concept of the creation.

This whole milky galaxy that we're in is changing it's course. We are heading towards ascension as some believe.
If this is a vast universe, and 'captain and his crew' has the technology, then they would be 'warping' through portals like wormholes which connects more than two different universes(just a theory). 

Everything in the universe is created through vibration.
A new word like 'substantiation' could be used to propose the idea of travelling rather than travelling this and that light year distance.

'Captain and the crew' descended to tell those monkeys that they created them, but they don't have the idea of who created them? 
again comes the 'dimension', plug this stuff in and the story would sound more non-pseudoscience

Overall, it's an interesting story. :D 
Super like it. :D 

Bittertruth

Thanks for reading and commnet.

Here I would like to clarify a little

1. How did dinasaurs

This fantasy is sabout human and god only, yes it is possible to write fiction about appearence of the dinasaurs, but to go up to that lebel may be a tourture for myself.

2. Light yeras , I think I already explained about it in my previous explanation

3. Yope there is no after life thats why I used the word "incarnate" ( appaear) not "reincarnate" (reappear). It is our human nature we see what we want to see, I think that happend to you here.

4. Hell and heaven: Planet vs different dimension. Yes that coud be an  option. I should have explorred different possibilities. But hey, this fiction is being writtien in my busy scehedule so whatever seemingly logical came to my mind I wrote it.but I will keep in mind those options If i write another fiction.

5. The script styel is inspired by Star trek Voyager. I have watched only few episodes of Stargate Universe. They always air it when I am at work.

Once again thnaks for comments

 Interesting ! Thanks for your writing, ---- bro.

nice job bro, :D 
come up with more interesting stuffs like these.

but hey, about No. 3... "... no afterlife.."
How could you be so sure about it? 
I can show you more than 100 proofs that there is afterlife and there is reincarnation.
Have you heard of edcar casey? 
how about other re-incarnated prophets?
They do show amazing recalls of their past life since their childhood.
There has been researches going on and scientific research is mute so far, no explanation.
I 've more than 12 physicists in my mind, who believes the energy inside us is the life force which can take forms lifetime after lifetime.
I've read books written by scientists, what more can you ask now? Most of these are spiritual in a sense, not saying religious.

If you go and see yourself,contemplate who you are , you'll find yourself close to divinity. That very yourself, that very consciousness which say, you are 'you' , just think about it.. you'll find many answers in my opinion. Just sit in, and think for at least hours in silence. 
The moment our consciousness is Shut Off here, it'll Turn On somewhere else with your very own consciousness. The only difference would be that you won't be able to recall any past memories of your form.

Like to read your response :D 
Chill

Adhikari bandhu,

Thanks for reading,

Bittertruth,

Yes many people claims about after life, there are prophets who claim they are reincarnated.
But our problem is, whom to believe? Believe in those who believe in reincarnation or believe in those who don’t believe in reincarnation?

There are many people who believe in re incarnation and much more who don’t believe in reincarnation
which side shall we take?

In my personal opinion
if you think there are enough evidence to believe after life and reincarnation then you believe on it.
And, if you believe there is enough evidence that there is no after life and reincarnations then you believe on that.

There is no harm in believing either of those two beliefs, until you remain peaceful.
After reaching 30 I started to think about who am I and why I am here and what I should do in my life. Read many books, many beliefs, and many religious books.

The capacity to reproduce and number of unlimited birth of different life forms indicate there is no after life and reincarnation. Whatever written in religious books have become so controversial that the belief has done more harm to human than benefit.

Those books which was supposed to do good for human have spread haltered and eneimicty among humans.

It’s  like Nepalese people  claiming themselves as Amale,  Amobadi, Kangress, Rajabadi all claiming that they are the best and they only can salvage Nepali / Nepal, You know the result,  Nepal/ Neplai going downhill, at least last half century.

To be a good human, you just need your heart and brain everything else is just make ups.

These are just my personal opinion

Do I claim I am absolutely right? Nope

Do I claim these are my final believes? Nope

If there are (In my opinion) compelling evidence about the things other than my beliefs than I will change.   My belief will change. Flexibility is the key word.

But in any case I will neither fight nor hate another human just to force my beliefs. Your beliefs are as good as mines if they are  peacefull.

I was not able complete the whole story when I posted this comment. Now it all makes sense. Nice read.

I respect your views. So be it :D 
Throw more sci-fi stuffs,, looking forward to it :D Bro
Am sick and tired of seeing stories on mere personal issues,
stories like yours is of high level , at least thats what I think :D

Great writing Dharse bro,


Being a time,space and astronomy fanatic myself, i loved every sentence of your writing.

I concur. I apologize for my premature comment earlier. I thought it was going to be a very banal story, but you proved it otherwise. Thank you!

Sidester,

This is my first attempt in this area so many shortcomings. Not trying to answer everything ,  just a fiction. Thanks for reading.

snurp

Thanks for taking time to read. and valuable comment.

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Human gatherings in all five different geographical areas:

Human Leader: We had audience with god today. They created us. They come from the place called “Heaven”. It is a very beautiful place where there is no hunger, no tiredness and no disease. They don’t fight like us. If we do good Karma we go to “Heaven” when we die, and live happily ever after. But if we do bad karma Gods won’t allow us in “Heaven”. They will send us to “Hell”, where there is more suffering than here. “Hell” is terrible place.

Another Human Leader: Unlike us they are not created by someone else. No one knows who created them. May be they created themselves. Unlike us they don’t die. They have something that makes them immortal. They will come to us as human when we need them and enlighten us. From today we will call devil to human who do bad karma and punish them following the tradition of Gods.

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Meeting in situation room

Science Officer: Permission to speak captain

Captain:  Go ahead

Science Officer: In my opinion we need to erase some of the memory about us from human brain Captain.

Captain: Why so?

Science Officer: Creation of life and endeavor to find the origin of the creation is the main driving force for the intelligence in the universe. This is the first time we created an intelligent species from a comparatively less intelligent one. By telling them how they were created may be we took the entire thrill they get from their advancement in future. Remember how our ancestors were thrilled when they found the origin of life?

Social counselor: I agree with science officer captain. If we expect them to develop into a full fledge intelligent life form. We should take back from them, the memory of their creation.  They will be looking for us in future whereas survival of our species is now approximately 1000 generations.

We already lost the capacity to reproduce sexually. As we all know using present cloning technique we will not be able to survive more that 1000 generations which is approximately one hundred thousand earth year.

Future human generation will be very much disappointed to find that their creators already gone.

Captain: Science officer tells me that our gene contains the memory about us, how it is possible to erase that knowledge?

Science Officer: It is not necessary to erase the knowledge contained within the gene captain. The memory within the gene will lead humans towards two different directions. One memory will inspire them to look for their creator. In the same time the acquired knowledge within the same gene will inspire them to find the origin of life, not their creator. This friction will be a great driving force for technological advancement of human society Captain. They may go beyond the creation, the “origin”

But if they remember we created them, the progress might put to a dead end.

Captain: Sound convincing. How do we do that?

Science Officer: Humans have developed special taste for alcohol Captain. After work they always ask us for alcohol. In fact drinking alcohol is slowly becoming social event.  Our scanning of their brain shows that after consuming alcohol the electrical impulse in human brain that generates the current of sense usually fails to hit the target, as a result after consuming alcohol humans frequently miss their target. Sense is there but execution of sense fails to materialized

Captain: Carry on

Science Officer: We will mix our memory eraser compound in alcohol and serve human during some ceremony. Our memory eraser will not be able to erase all the memory pertaining to us but it will cast a doubt about us. I think that is more than enough to develop different philosophy about life, creation and origin.

Captain: Make sure that it will leave no side effect on humans.

Science Officer: We will do many experiments before carrying out real operation Captain.

Captain: Very Well

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After 5 years

Meeting in situation room

Captain: SITREP please

Commander: All preparation for our departure is complete captain. Everything is as per schedule. We have five new engines, and materials to build four more.

Science Officer: All our experiments on human worked fine captain. The last experiment will be working fine too. We have tested 101 times in our laboratory. It is safe

Social Counselor: Humans are showing very promising sign that this species one day will lead the universe, if they don’t make the same mistake our ancestors once did. They will continue long after our species parish. Long live the human, our creation.

Captain: I hope so. Let’s complete the checklist for departure.

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A big party was being held in all five geographical locations. Alcohol with special taste was being served together with many delicious foods. Humans were trying everything served to them.

By mid night

All humans were drunk and sleeping

After one hour

A Huge metal body was rising up in earth’s atmosphere. It soon disappeared into deep space.

Next day after sunrise

Some humans wake up. They started to look at each other

They saw some structure around them, they started to think: What are they?

The End

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PS: All above conversations were in different language. I translated them into English

 nothing out of ordinary in terms of literary term. Having watched numerous documentary about ancient aliens, even story seems too mundane. try reading "Chariots of Gods". It will give a lot of insight about this fantasy.

Lamopuri

Yes, many stories have been written on many interesting topics, God, creation of human, space is being some  of them. And, people will continue to write on these subjects in years to come. If we put lid on the topics saying that numerous things have already been written than new Idea will not flourish.

I agree the story is not a virgin one. But, I tried to input some ideas which were for the first time. Like

1. Nitrogen breathing gods

3. Energy metabolism in species god involving nitrogen rich compounds. Human and plants use glucose as a major source of energy which gives 4 Kcal/gram whereas hydrazine gives lot more energy 17 Kcal/gram that is why I indirectly hinted the  nitrogen  catabolism in species god .

 

 Hydrazine and water are very similar in their physical properties

 

                                H₂O                        N₂H₄ (hydrazine)

Density                 1.000 g/cm³        1.008 g/cm³

Melting Point     0.00^oC                   1.54^oC

Boiling Point       100^oC   113.8^oC

Hydrazine exists naturally, although for different purpose, in algae and tobacco. Life forms on earth already have system to produce it naturally.

Hence body structure of god and human are not that different even though they are different species. Similarly in order to genes and hormones effective on humans they need to have metabolism which does not go against the major fluid us human use (water)

I didn’t include those things which I was thinking while writing the plot, because it may be too technical for the ppl from different field.

3. Existence of heaven and hell in a different twist.

4. Humans partly (not entirely) created by another species called God. (Not god as in religious books)

5. Why it is not possible for human to live in Heaven and Hell

6. Why we always look for the god or origin? Why not our brain stops thinking about creation etc. It is because all the memory of our creation is stored in a tiny part inside the nucleus called nucleolus. This nucleolus is equivalent to ROM (some ppl also refer to it as firmware) in modern day electronics. Because of this firmware we humans are always looking for GOD. These concepts are mine.

Plot style is inspired by Star trek voyager as I previously mentioned. Many terms used in the plot are the terms they use in my institute. I also used some of the post titles which are in use in my institution.  I thought I was working in very exciting   place, but for some of you it turned out to be mundane. Difference in taste, I believe.

I believe I have read Chariots of gods may be three years back. There are other books too. This is my first attempt, maybe it is unfair for “Chariots of god” to compare with my fiction.

My story is concentrated on creation of human by using alien gene. Limitations of oxygen metabolism, and disappearance of dinosaurs.

One insight from one school of thoughts is not enough my friend. For such complex matter, various “insights” exists until we define it. So what insight we got from Chariots of gods must not put lid on this complex matter.

I believe many stories/plots yet to be written on this complex matter.

Anyway thanks comments.

lamopuri, chariot of gods is what I recommend everyone to read as well :D 

 _____ - it was very pretty good for the first time. You actually improved in later posts.
Way to go. I concur with some other posters that sajha needs more than just one type of "katha", expression less and meter-less so called gazhals. 
But I donot concur with other posters who said you have to be good as writer "A" or your story should be good as book "B".  You should have told them, 'if I were a pro, why would I be posting in sajha, duh!!!'
-Mav

Maverick

Thanks for noticing the improvement. Some people  fail to see the seriousness of the attempt, the message within and differences.They will learn in time. There are many others who understand all these. This positive energy helps  me move forward.
Thanks for reading and positive feedback.

 Just pushing up