Sabai bhanchan dashai ayo ayo re
Tara Garib janta mathi dasha ghoptina laagyo re
Sara Dhani jaag madira maa maasta hune re
Eka tir Garib purpuro maa haath raakh ne re

Dashina maa Dhani ka putra ra putri Changa uduchan re
Yeta garib ka santan te vismayuda ka tuteka changa lutchan re
Dashima Naya pahiran laguna hod bagi chalcha re
Tara garib haru purano kapada eestere gari ramauchan re

Kasle bhanyo dashai maa Khasi bali dinu parcha re
Garib ko mukh maa kasle haal dela rayo ko saag re
Ishwor ke danab lai paragi gari phar ke ye re
tara kina yo parba manu nu parche

bhanun ko momo khane sok pura hune bho re
Tara kami damai ko bela aayo dasai maa ghati ra puchar magne re
Dhani ka santan khasi kaa kaan poli khaan chan
Garib ka santaan ek tale ghar bata chiyae chiyae herchan re

Accham ko yo parba re ishwor ko naam me re
Ek tira choro ko laas jalauna bhya ko chaina
arko tira maar haan na ko aature re
Hey prabhu aachama cha timro shritre re

Galti bhayecha timi bata manushe banau na re
Soche ko thiyo shristo ko namuna banuchu re
Tara aaja timi pani chaakit chau yo neeyam mathi re
Baru yeso gara sampurna jagat nai dhosta pari deu re

moneyminded bro ta aasukabi jasto chha ni, sajha ma jod tod ka jawaf dinda didai kabita lekhi dine :)

by the way, not bad at all. Ekdamai sadharan sabda haru matra rakhera lekhe pani kabita ghut lagdo chha

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Dhani ka santan khasi kaa kaan poli khaan chan
Garib ka santaan ek tale ghar bata chiyae chiyae herchan re
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wastabik dasain lai dher thor jhalkaune khal ko chha

people at sajha rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Moneyminded dude, that was a nice piece of poem in sacrastic manner observing the present secenario of nepal. I do notice that you write in similar style of Maha kabi laxmi prasad devkota. I discovered the way you place words are as inspired by khanda kabya ( Muna Madan).
bhanun ko momo khane sok pura hune bho re
Tara kami damai ko bela aayo dasai maa ghati ra puchar magne re

( this verse over here looks kinda a funny with name mention bahun). I do belong to brahnam clain but i do eat lot of buffalo meat and love steak. The second verse is quite touching

Should be call u Yuva kabi of Sajha

I am a silent observer of this sajha form since 2002/2003 i suppose ....but hadn't post till today anything.I do use to read all those posting of all dudes around here ...among those oys he did use to write which reflects tht reality of life.Since tht i had hardly find someone who touches the human feelings and write though there were many good writes like ....meera..domitirx..something it's bit long his/her name... and all.And now this dude moneyminded has written somehting sweet and simple which really reflects the reality of life. Thumps up to u dude though some of ur postings were just simply crap but u seems to be gone through life... seems u have experienced life .

way to go dude..........
-nivaN

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