We were sitting in the car
And I told him to stop
As the car came to a halt
In my throat was a knot

"We have to break up"
I said with a frown
He just stared at me
Then he looked down

He picked up a paper and pen
And scribbled something on it
Not paying attention to me
God I feel like shit

He folded up the paper
Then handed it to me
Still holding back the tears
"Read it later" he said calmly

He started up the car again
And we were on our way
Why did it have to end like this
Did it really have to be today

I shoved the paper in my pocket
As we crossed the rail road track
Then we stopped at my house
I got out without turning back

I took long heavy steps
Because I'm nothing but trash
Then something grabbed my attention
When behind me was a huge crash

I turned around to see my nightmare
I recognized the car instantly
A train and a car were coiled together
From there, everything got so blurry

Figures running and screaming
"Oh my god, call the ambulance!!!"
Although I already knew he was dead
My life truly is unfair

I just couldn't accept it
The pain I have inside
A million knives went through my heart
And the pain I could not hide

I remember the note he handed me
I read it and began to cry
It said in four simple words
"Without you, I'd die"

I wanted one more look,
one last look into those eyes.
To see your face one last time,
Memories displayed,
flooding to me from within.
Familiar touch of the hand,
started me to cry emptyness again.
One touch of your hand,
To hold you one last time,
Five seconds of redemption,
to see what I've lost once again.
I'll love you always knowing within,
without you my life wont begin.
So come close now and listen close,
Sorries cried out in lost words of remourse

badarnikt,
r u sure .. dyamnnnnnn..........
i did not know u were longing that much (o:
wish u all the best ......

[ do not cry over spilled milk though]

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once again
what do i know (o:

THAPAP Ji!

Thank you much for wishes. well truth is i never have cryed for my love yet.I am just trying to write something that all.

I'll love you always knowing within,
without you my life wont begin.....nice one, Keep writing !!!

Nice one BadarniKT ...keep writing
:)

Oh oh.. can I post one too??

You'd think I would lose my soul,
Be totally lost as if in a black hole.
My heart swooning with your memory,
Reaching out to the darkness blindly!
You broke my heart, I cant deny,
And it did hurt I must confide.
But gone are the days and the feelings,
'Without you' I deny to be a mere weakling.
Of course you were a part of me,
Instead of 'I', it was a 'WE'.
But you chose your life and your way,
Why then should I remember you everyday?
My last word to you is "goodbye",
May you go on with your life as I go on with mine!!

Hmmm .... good decision.
Rhythm ...Nice Poem
:)

.... But you chose your life and your way,
Why then should I remember you everyday?
My last word to you is "goodbye",
May you go on with your life as I go on with mine!! ...
Goodbye indeed...:)
Balla Alchhi huna chhodyo..:D
Aaru ni lekhum lekhum..:)

Nirman jyu,
I am just trying to abide to your wishes and order. What is a mere girl like me in front of such a great personality like you. Forgive me for saying so but it seems to me like I am not the only lazy one here. Havent really seen a lot of your writings nowadays either. Correct me if I am wrong for I do not want to offend you in anyway. I shall always be your follower and am waiting eagerly for your next command.

Yours truly,
Rythm ;)

Rythm jyu,
Offend re...hehe....Great Personality bhanda ta Mero naak fulera jhandai jhareko..Dhanna Jharena..Jahreko bhye Offended hunthen..:P...
For the time being, I m hibernating for good...If I write now, I will be writing most weird stuffs...So Sajhabasilai maya garera nalekheko..:D...
I m enjoying my ride a inqusitive reader these days, In reading I find the joy(...But not the course books..:D..)...Maybe, Someday soon I will be writing again..And I command now u to write more for now...:D
Hope to read more from ur side soon...
Keep writing...:)
Urs truly,
Nirman~*...;)

Actually, Where is Badarnikti also these days....Alchhi bhyeko jasto chha..Lu Badarnijyu..hajur ni lekhna thalnus chhit chhito...:)
Aali Birahi bhawana kaam bhyeko lekhnu hai...:)

Where do you go when you're lonely
Where do you go when you're blue
Where do you go when you're lonely, I'll follow you
When the stars go blue

lau, badarni, welcome back! good to see you writing again! :)
and rythm, thank you for writing- the part nirman highlighted was fantastic!

.................
i moved out of my apartment on monday.
my life in boxes.
and in those boxes, memories of you....
as i cleaned under the bed, i found a bobbypin you wore in your hair.
and with the sight of that, the memories came rushing back with the intensity of a california wildfire.
and i envied that bobbypin, as it was once something that belonged to you.
there was a time when i thought i too was yours.
but there you are, thousands and thousands of miles away.
immersing yourself in a new world, living a new life, speaking a new language.
and your emails speak nothing of us.
why is it that the more i remember....
the more you seem to forget?

Sristi sis Thank you

B maila ji! Thank you

Nirman ji hus i will try hoina alchi bhaya ko just don't have much time.

Rythm sis plzz do .Nice one sis

m sabi ji! nice one

palpali gaula ji!
Thank you.Nice to see ya here too. Good one keep it up

omg, great poets, you guys shud try out on these poet stuff, talk to your english teachers, you guys are gonna make our nepali ass proud
Nice peoms ( I suck at poems )

badarnikt, more postings plz..This one is simply great...

People do have time to go through 2005 thread...

Smart observation, keho.

Shwetaa was in love/fling radar by a lesbo....

Shoot answer in a wrong thread......